About Us

Where do these 'Dogs come from, and what can they do for you?

DESCRIBING: A University of Hawai‘i at Mānoa logo.

DESCRIPTION: The College of Social Sciences logo, from the University of Hawai‘i at Mānoa, School of Communication and Information is mostly text. The names of the college and of the school are in all-caps, but the name of the university is not. There is a TM (trademark) symbol after the name of the university. 

Above the text, the primary visual element of the logo is a pointy U-shaped icon, which could be interpreted as a V because of that point at its base. Its left arm is positioned where the typical left arm of a U would be, but the right arm swoops up and is higher than the left and crosses slightly over the centerline of the letter, creating a circular shape rather than a typical bowl of a U-shaped counterspace. 

The letter form itself is composed of multiple three-sided and four-sided abstract shapes, that combine to form the U, with sections typically broken into two or three pieces and placed together like a puzzle, with an open line of white space between each piece. The Journalism Watchdogs were created by Dr. Brett Oppegaard of The University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa in the summer of 2024 as a way to test the efficacy and usefulness of Large Language Models and AI interfaces in a context of Journalism education. They are intended to simulate the feedback a student might get from a professor, or a professional writing coach, about a specific aspect of a particular piece of journalistic writing. In other words, the humans still are in charge. People pick their story ideas. They choose how to report and write their pieces. A person must make a significant story draft to get any useful feedback from these 'Dogs. The 'Dogs are not intended as fix-alls. They are specialists, addressing common journalistic writing and reporting issues. They each focus on a specific area and aim to provide feedback to the journalist to help that writer to address that area of concern.

They were inspired by the UniD Guidedogs that Dr. Oppegaard created for The UniDescription Project a few months earlier, in February 2024, to help audio describers during Descriptathon 10, which is a hackathon-like workshop aimed at improving inclusiveness at public places, such as national parks, via Audio Description. They were a big hit with the writers in that context, who appreciated the immediacy and depth of the responses, and the opportunities to test their ideas before sharing them with human peers, editors, and audiences.

The need for immediate, in-depth, and thoughtful feedback transcends many writing contexts. Emerging LLMs could do this type of feedback loop well, so Dr. Oppegaard started to think of other applications of this same idea. He was the Program Director of the Journalism program at UH at the time, so serving similar needs of journalists made sense as a next step.

The Watchdogs were supported by a grant from UH Mānoa's School of Communication and Information, where Dr. Oppegaard serves as a tenured professor. The School's chair, Dr. Hye-ryeon Lee, saw the potential for the crossover project, supported Dr. Oppegaard's experimentation with it, and lobbied for funds for this initiative through the UH School.

These Watchdogs are still in the experimental stage. We have heavily tested the systems and feel confident that most of the feedback can be helpful. That said, the LLMs also sometimes return errant information or provide advice that human counterparts would not suggest. But overall, if the word of the 'Dog is not considered gospel but instead something for a writer to think about, we think the overall effect will be improved journalistic writing.'

What do you think? We encourage your feedback as a user of this system. How did it work for you? Please let us know, and we'll adjust our programming accordingly, in an effort to make the best-possible tool for journalists.

Why have a focus on ʻōlelo Hawai’i?

The University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa — the founding sponsor of the Journalism Watchdogs — is a Native Hawaiian Place of Learning intent on re-normalizing the use of ‘ōlelo Hawai‘i in the state. ‘Ōlelo Hawaiʻi (Hawaiian language) is one of the two official state languages in Hawaiʻi (English is the other).

Hawaiʻi is one of only three states to support multiple official languages (with Alaska and South Dakota; four American territories — American Samoa, Guam, Northern Mariana Islands, and Puerto Rico — also have at least one official language beyond English). As an official state language, use of ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi is encouraged and supported in all of our UH classrooms and school-related activities.

The particulars of that language renormalizing process system-wide still are under development. But we have decided to be a leader in the pragmatics of this initiative, and, in turn, the School of Communication and Information adopted a formal policy in May 2024 that requires the proper use of the language’s two diacritical marks in all public-facing communication, including all published journalistic, marketing, and public relations content shared with the broader community.

Those key diacritical marks are the ‘okina, which looks like a backward and flipped apostrophe (‘ vs. ’) and indicates a glottal stop, and the kahakō, which looks like a long line over a vowel and indicates a long-vowel pronunciation. These marks are not punctuation. They are the representation of the intended character and sound, and leaving them out, technically, indicates a misspelling or misuse.

While fluency in ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi is not a requirement at the University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa for graduation, cultural competency is an underlying subtext of the university’s General Education curriculum. In turn, SCI students should not only be aware that ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi is an official language of the state. When using ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi, they should model appropriate use, including the proper inclusion of the diacritics.

This ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi-focused Journalism Watchdog tool called "Poni" is a guide intended to help. The Watchdog will assist users in recognizing when an ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi word is being used in a text and how that word should be marked with diacritics. This AI Watchdog is good at this task but not infallible. So please take her recommendations and use those to develop your own understanding of how the ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi text is being used, in your particular case, and therefore how it should be punctuated.

After consulting with our Journalism Watchdog, here are other sources that also can be used to confirm and develop deeper understandings of ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi in practice:

In terms of recommended local style, for place names that are commonly used in English slang, such as Sandy’s, which technically is called Sandy Beach Park, our official description would be along these lines:

"Students gathered for a beach clean-up at Wāwāmalu, or Sandy’s beach."

Such a technical editing process is common in all academic fields already. For example, in Journalism, this type of editing process is akin to using the Associated Press Stylebook to ensure professional alignment in written style with other journalists and then adding a “local style,” which most newsrooms do, for common words and terms used in a particular geographic area that are not addressed in the stylebook.

Some common words we use, for example, with the diacritical marks included, are:

ʻāina, Hawaiʻi, Hale Hālāwai, kamaʻāina, Liliʻuokalani, Mānoa, Mōʻiliʻili, Oʻahu, ʻŌlelo, Waikīkī, etc.

Some common words we use, for example, that do not include diacritical marks, are:

aloha, Hawaiian, Honolulu, hula, Lahaina, kapu, kuleana, lei, mahalo, mele, menehune, moana, etc.

These most-common uses can be memorized, but when in any doubt, check with the official sources above and, if needed, consult further with a fluent speaker of ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi.

Additional resources include:

This policy of style adherence to ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi was created in the Jour 481 class, led by senior Journalism majors Hiʻilawe Neves and Kalawaiʻa Nunies, under the guidance of Dr. Brett Oppegaard, in Spring 2024 and approved by a vote of the school-wide faculty on May 9, 2024.